Wordsworth, "Simon Lee," and the craving for incidents.
McGrath, Brian
IN HIS PREFACE TO LYRICAL BALLADS (1800), WILLIAM WORDSWORTH
FAMOUSLY, if also enigmatically, defines poetry as "the spontaneous
overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion
recollected in tranquility." (1) Readers of Wordsworth's
preface often concentrate on one half or other of this formulation.
Readers who privilege the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings
produce an understanding of Wordsworth's poetry, and of romantic
poetry more generally, that relies heavily on theories of expression and
aligns poetic power with spontaneity. The fact that for Wordsworth these
powerful feelings are "recollected in tranquility" remains
enigmatic, in part because it introduces a necessary temporal delay, a
level of mediation that is difficult to reconcile with the unmediated
access to powerful feelings the first half of Wordsworth's
formulation promises. Readers who privilege the importance of
"recollection" have in recent years linked Wordsworth's
commitment to tranquility to a civilizing process that subordinates
immediate sensation to reflective judgment. Tranquility marks a
necessary temporal and psychological distance from the initial
sense-experience and becomes one way for the poet to maintain control
over such experiences. As Noel Jackson summarizes,
"Wordsworth's claim that the poet is capable of formally
abstracting from and exerting control over the immediacy of
'vulgar' sense-experience has often been read as the signature
proposition of Wordsworthian aesthetics and a crucial expression of its
ideological character." (2) Through reflection, in other words, the
poet learns to impose continuity on discontinuous sense-data. Such
readings of Wordsworth find in the movement from a spontaneous overflow
of feeling to the recollection of these feelings in tranquility a model
for the development, as enculturation, of the individual, society and
the nation state.
However, Wordsworth's introduction in the preface to Lyrical
Ballads of a necessary temporal delay and an accompanying psychological
distance from immediate sensations, made possible by what he calls
"tranquility," also introduces an interpretive dilemma. At
some key moments, Wordsworth invites readers to conclude that the
feelings recollected are not exactly the poet's, which results in
an idiosyncratic understanding of tranquility. Famously, Wordsworth
writes in The Prelude (1805) of his past self." "so wide
appears / The vacancy between me and those days, / Which yet have such
self-presence in my mind / That, sometimes, when I think of them, I seem
/ Two consciousnesses, conscious of myself/And of some other
Being." (3) Wordsworthian tranquility, which implies a certain
distance from oneself and from one's own feelings, may not always
denote an experience of calm, but an experience of estrangement from the
very things one hopes never to feel estranged from, like oneself. With
"tranquility," I suggest, Wordsworth describes not merely a
psychological state belonging to a "civilized" subject but
also introduces a certain interpretive dilemma that poetry poses for its
readers, even when the reader is also the poet himself.
Through a reading of the concluding lines of "Simon Lee: The
Old Huntsman with an Incident in Which he was Concerned," in which
this necessary delay is typographically marked by the inclusion of a
dash that separates the final four lines of the poem, I show how this
delay far from enabling an assertion of control over the experience
recorded produces instead two competing reflections on or responses to
the incident. What Wordsworth's poem demonstrates in closing is a
poet-narrator less in control of his responses to the incident with
which he was concerned than has previously been noted in the body of
criticism that responds to the poem. The concluding lines of
Wordsworth's poem suggest that one danger of tranquility--of the
necessary temporal and psychological distance from incidents--may be a
sort of estrangement, for the poet-narrator himself as well as for the
reader, the interpreter, from the incident the poem describes.
Readings of Wordsworth's poetry that privilege the spontaneity
of powerful feelings have missed other passages from the preface to
Lyrical Ballads that have, in recent years, come to a renewed
legibility. In his preface Wordsworth identifies a modem dilemma:
a multitude of causes, unknown to former times, are now acting with
a combined force to blunt the discriminating powers of the mind,
and unfitting it for all voluntary exertion to reduce it to a state
of almost savage torpor. The most effective of these causes are the
great national events which are daily taking place, and the
increasing accumulation of men in cities, where the uniformity of
their occupations produces a craving for extraordinary incident,
which the rapid communication of intelligence hourly gratifies.
(249)
For Wordsworth the health of the mind is threatened by the too
rapid communication of intelligence about events "daily taking
place." Certain technological advances make it possible for the
mind to be supplied with extraordinary incidents (and so momentarily
gratified). But the cost of such a craving is alienation, solipsism, and
even death, what Wordsworth describes as the absence of all
"voluntary exertion." The rapid communication of intelligence
gratifies a craving for extraordinary incidents, but gratification is
opposed to voluntary exertion and thus also to anything like willed
action.
In this way, Wordsworth's fear as it is expressed in 1800
anticipates the failure of realistic, real-time media today to bring
about proper political action, even as it perfects the transmission--the
rapid communication--of intelligence. (4) The numbness that consumers of
realistic, real-time media experience today when confronted with massive
amounts of information may be a version of the blunted modem mind
Wordsworth diagnoses in the preface. As Geoffrey Hartman writes in The
Longest Shadow: "Even while deploring and condemning the events, we
experience what the poet John Keats called 'the feel of not to feel
it,' as we continue with everyday life." (5) While information
is consumed at a great rate, one fears that the greater the rate of
transmission the less effective the intelligence becomes. News of events
daily taking place momentarily satisfies the craving for shock and
surprise but at the expense of the mind's ability to respond to the
events. The rapid communication of intelligence becomes one way among
many of blunting the impact of events, or more strongly put, of avoiding
the impact of events, rather than a means to understand or respond to
them.
While the extraordinary incident seems to offer some escape from
the uniformity of history, nothing is more uniform in
modernity--Wordsworth suggests indirectly--than the craving for
extraordinary incidents produced by the rapid communication of
intelligence. In this light, the clamor for shock and surprise, for
intense experience, is possibly the modern mind's last great
defense against experience; the rapid communication of intelligence
becomes a way not to experience events or the feelings they inspire. As
Giorgio Agamben writes in Infancy and History, "the question of
experience can be approached nowadays only with an acknowledgment that
it is no longer accessible to us." (6)
A somewhat embarrassed Wordsworth situates poetry--specifically the
poetry of Lyrical Ballads--in relation to this dilemma, and so raises
the ethical stakes of reading poetry: "When I think upon this
degrading thirst after outrageous stimulation, I am almost ashamed to
have spoken of the feeble effort with which I have endeavoured to
counteract it" (249). What role does poetry play in counteracting
this thirst after outrageous stimulation without retreating into
another, aesthetic form of solipsism? How does poetry
"un-blunt" the mind or make possible alternative forms of
response to events daily taking place? If experience is no longer
accessible, can poetry make experience possible again? It is clear from
Wordsworth's preface that poetry is not to guard readers against
stimulation as such. It is not the role of poetry to isolate readers
from the world--though this is one way in which the function of the
aesthetic has been misunderstood. But neither is poetry, worries
Wordsworth, to satisfy readers' thirst for outrageous stimulation,
which is satisfied by the works Wordsworth opposes: "Frantic
novels, sickly and stupid German Tragedies, and deluges of idle and
extravagant stories in verse" (Lyrical Ballads 294).
While powerful feelings and their spontaneous overflow are
necessary for poetic production, Wordsworth is keenly aware of the
dangers presented by this thirst after outrageous stimulation, linked as
it is to the craving for immediate communication of extraordinary
incidents. Wordsworth challenges the popular sentimental literature of
his day, which stimulated quickened emotional responses to
representations of events. If poetry is only the expression of the
powerful overflow of spontaneous feeling then it is always in danger of
satisfying the craving for extraordinary incidents and so participating
in the blunting of the mind that Wordsworth diagnoses in his preface.
Poetry, hopes Wordsworth, makes possible some form of response that
is neither an abdication of the responsibility to respond nor a thirst
for more outrageous stimulation, for more rapid communication of
intelligence. In turning away from an intensity of feeling, in mediating
the experience of spontaneous feeling, Wordsworth hopes to make possible
the return of-the return to--feeling. Tranquility, however, understood
as the interpretive dilemma that poetry poses, interrupts the redemptive
trajectory suggested here, for if tranquility mediates the craving for
spontaneity, aligned as it is with outrageous stimulation, it also
alienates oneself from oneself. Feeling returns but only as unclaimed by
consciousness.
O gentle reader!
To consider some of the issues Wordsworth raises in his preface in
more specific detail, I turn now to one of Wordsworth's
"Lyrical Ballads," first published anonymously in 1798,
"Simon Lee: The Old Huntsman with an Incident in Which he was
Concerned." The poem describes an old man struggling to survive and
a young man's offer of aid when he happens to come upon Simon
working to sever a root. In its complicated concluding lines, the poem
raises as a question the ability of the poet-narrator to respond
appropriately to Simon Lee's struggles, both his more general
struggle to survive in a modern world that has no use for him, as well
as his more specific struggle, described in the second half of the poem,
to sever a root. To the extent to which the poem raises as a question
the ability of the poet-narrator to respond appropriately to one in
need, it also questions the ability of poetry to function as a bridge
between sympathetic identification (in the form of spontaneous and
powerful feeling) and political or ethical action in the form of
humanitarian aid. What is, in other words, the relation between powerful
feelings and action, especially given Wordsworth's suggestion in
the preface that a craving for incidents capable of producing powerful
feelings threatens to produce apathy and not action?
The poem has challenged readers for centuries. It perhaps
challenged its first reader, Wordsworth himself, most of all. As Ernest
de Selincourt writes, "On the text of no other short poem did W.
expend so much labour as on Simon Lee." (7) Wordsworth repeatedly
revised the poem over the years, returning to it again and again; unlike
other poems originally published in Lyrical Ballads, by the time he
published "Simon Lee" in The Poetical Works of William
Wordsworth in 1832 it had changed considerably. "Simon Lee"
also challenges readers more directly; the poem is likely most famous
for the apostrophe to the reader that Wordsworth includes between the
ballad-like first part of the poem (which corresponds roughly to the
first part of the poem's subtitle: "The Old Huntsman")
and the lyric-like second part of the poem (which corresponds roughly to
the second part of the poem's title: "with an Incident in
Which He Was Concerned"). Like "Hart-Leap Well," which
begins the second volume of Lyrical Ballads published with the addition
of several poems in 1800, "Simon Lee" participates in an
experiment in poetic form. Generated by the tension Wordsworth perceived
between narrative and lyric poetry, "Simon Lee" moves the
reader from the ballad, with its stress on narrative action, to the
lyric, with its stress on emotional intensity. (8) In situating the
apostrophe to the reader between the ballad and the lyric, the ballad
(the narrative of suffering chronicled in the first half of the poem) is
aligned with the sensationalism the poet-narrator critiques.
In the ballad-like first part of the poem, the poet-narrator
describes Simon Lee in his youth: "No man like him the horn could
sound, / And no man was so full of glee" (17-18). Simon's
youth is celebrated, but it is celebrated in order for it to be more
effectively contrasted with his present condition, the condition in
which the poet-narrator finds him. In the past, Simon was a famed
hunter, but now he has grown old: "he is lean and he is sick"
(33). In this way, the poem reminds one of--and responds to--other poems
published during this period that chronicle the experiences of the poor,
the forgotten, the mad, etc., like Robert Southey's "The
Widow" and "The Idiot," or Charlotte Smith's
"The Dead Beggar," in other words, the humanitarian protest
poem.
However, in "Simon Lee" the poet-narrator anticipates and
then actively frustrates the expectations of the imagined reader in
addressing the reader directly after narrating Simon Lee's decline:
"My gentle reader, I perceive / How patiently you've waited, /
And I'm afraid that you expect / Some tale will be related"
(69-72). After contrasting Simon's youth with his present
condition, the poet-narrator abruptly announces that the poem will move
now in a new direction which calls attention to the imagined
reader's investment in sensationalism. The apostrophe questions the
reader's desire for narratives of suffering. With the apostrophe
the poet-narrator turns, as the second half of the poem's subtitle
warns readers he will, to an incident in which Simon Lee is concerned.
The poem moves from a detached third person narrative to a more intimate
first person perspective, in which the poet-narrator's encounter
with Simon vainly attempting to sever a root is described. A reader of
what Wordsworth calls "extravagant stories in verse," the
apostrophe implies, is not likely to believe that such an unremarkable
incident will produce an emotionally intense experience. As Stephen M.
Parrish suggests, however, the goal of a poem like "Simon Lee"
is to "reduce the role of story or event in narrative, in favor of
passion or feeling--to internalize the action." (9) The poem
focuses on an unremarkable incident to aid the reader to invest in a
passion or feeling that is not reducible to sentimentahsm or
sensationalism. The stress is not placed on the incident but on the
reader's ability (or inability) to "take it." As the
poet-narrator explains: "What more I have to say is short, / I hope
you'll kindly take it; / It is no tale; but should you think, /
Perhaps a tale you'll make it" (77-80). At the same time, the
presence of the apostrophe suggests that the reader is in need of some
instruction. The poet-narrator anticipates and intentionally thwarts the
narrative expectations of his imagined reader, expectations that he has
helped produce in the first half of the poem. As James Averill notes in
Wordsworth and the Poetry of Human Suffering: "Expectation, the
craving for the 'moving accident,' the desire for the stimulus
of fictional suffering, becomes a symptom of deficiency." (10) The
first half of the poem produces in the reader just the sort of desire
for fictional suffering the poet-narrator critiques. Precisely because
the poet-narrator's imagined reader is not likely to find the
incident emotionally powerful, the poet-narrator sets out to frustrate
(and alter) the imagined reader's expectations. As Wordsworth
explains in the preface to Lyrical Ballads, his goal, specific to
"Simon Lee," is to produce "another and more salutary
impression than we are accustomed to receive" from ordinary moral
sensations (Lyrical Ballads 293).
As a result, though, "Simon Lee" questions the goals of
the humanitarian protest poem by drawing attention to its own narrative
frame. In stimulating moral sensations, fictional suffering always risks
generating the craving for extraordinary incidents Wordsworth criticizes
in his preface to Lyrical Ballads. Similarly, humanitarian protest poems
may challenge readers to rethink the prevailing assumptions that govern
responses to the poor, but they also risk substituting sympathetic
identification with the representation of suffering for sympathetic
identification with what one might call actual suffering. Does the
fictionalization of suffering inspire readers to put an end to suffering
or does it relieve readers of the responsibility to act because it
allows readers to view the suffering of others as fictional? (11) In a
reading of The Ruined Cottage, Karen Swann explores Wordsworth's
use of narrative frames. Wordsworth, writes Swann, uses "a
mediating narrative consciousness to interpose distance between the
reader and the narrative of suffering--thus encouraging a meditative
rather than a stimulated response to painful events." Wordsworth
often complicates the narrative frames of his poems in order to draw
attention to the "narrative acts themselves and thus invite[s] the
public to reflect on its own investments in sensationalism." (12)
Like The Ruined Cottage, the goal of "Simon Lee" is not
merely to inspire within the reader great feelings of sympathy for Simon
Lee, or even for those who exist in a condition similar to his. If this
were the case, it is not clear that Wordsworth--or the
poet-narrator--should need to interrupt the narrative the ballad
constructs. One suspects that sympathy is more easily produced in a
reader when it is not demanded of him or her in quite so direct a
manner. In moving from the narrative quality of the first half of the
poem to a specific incident that testifies to Simon's weakened
condition, the poet-narrator calls for the reader to make a tale of this
incident, to discover feeling in those moments others pass over in the
search for "extravagant stories in verse." In turning to such
an unremarkable incident, and yet one capable of producing great
feeling, the poet-narrator reminds readers that the desire for
extraordinary incidents may preclude and not enable feeling. The desire
for sensational tales may be one way in which feeling is evaded.
Alas!
In frustrating the imagined reader's expectations, the
poet-narrator foregrounds the poem's didactic aims. In the rest of
this essay I turn to the closing lines of the poem, which seem at odds
with the didactic aims the poet-narrator sets for the poem with the
apostrophe. While the apostrophe implies the presence of a knowing
poet-narrator, one who hopes to instruct his reader in how to read poems
and so come to experience the world differently (as well as respond to
those in need appropriately), the closing lines suggest an alternative
reading at odds with this one aim.
In the second part of the poem, the poet-narrator writes of his
encounter with Simon toiling away at a tangled root. Simon is so weak
that it seems he might toil forever at the task. But the poet-narrator
kindly takes the mattock and severs the root with one stroke:
"You're overtasked, good Simon Lee,
Give me your tool" to him I said;
And at the word right gladly he
Received my proffer'd aid.
I struck, and with a single blow
The tangled root I sever'd,
At which the poor old man so long
And vainly had endeavour'd.
(89-96)
The action produces in Simon an overwhelming response. The poem
concludes:
The tears into his eyes were brought,
And thanks and praises seemed to run
So fast out of his heart, I thought
They never would have done.
--I've heard of hearts unkind, kind deeds
With coldness still returning.
Alas! the gratitude of men
Has oftner left me mourning.
(97--104)
The poet-narrator severs the root and this act of kindness inspires
such gratitude in Simon Lee that the poet-narrator is almost unsure how
to respond. In fact, instead of narrating how he responded to
Simon's effusive expressions of gratitude, the poet-narrator turns
to address the reader again in the concluding four lines of the poem.
The poet-narrator pauses (a pause marked by the inclusion of the dash)
and then begins to reflect on the incident. The poet-narrator remarks
not simply on the fact of Simon's tears, but the fact that tears of
gratitude surprise him and transmit great emotional force. Simon's
gratitude produces a strong emotional response in the poet-narrator, who
begins to mourn. The poet-narrator writes that he has heard of
"hearts unkind" that have failed to express gratitude. He has,
in other words, heard of ingratitude. And while ingratitude might cause
one to mourn, sometimes gratitude, strangely enough, causes one to mourn
more. Why precisely Simon's gratitude should cause the
poet-narrator to mourn is left unexplained. The dash separating the
memory of the incident from the self-conscious reflection on the
incident marks a silence in the text. It may be that Simon's tears
expose the poet-narrator's inability to respond in kind. For what
sort of response do tears of gratitude call? Or, the poet-narrator may
mourn Simon's condition. He may mourn, in other words, the fact
that such a simple act, the severing of a root, should produce tears in
Simon, pointing to the discrepancy between the excessive nature of
Simon's expressions of gratitude and the poet-narrator's
accomplishment. After all, the poet-narrator has merely severed a root.
There is little to suggest that in the near future Simon will not be
faced with a similar dilemma.
Or, the poet-narrator may mourn the unanticipated and potentially
negative significance of the action that he has performed. The presence
of "seems" in the lines preceding the dash ("And thanks
and praises seemed to run / So fast out of his heart") raises as a
question whether or not Simon is in fact grateful for the action
performed by the poet-narrator. By severing the root, the poet-narrator
has freed Simon from the mechanical repetition of his own actions. Simon
"gladly" receives the proffered aid and the poet-narrator
saves him from what seems like ceaseless toil. However, what is true in
the underworld may be true on earth as well; what one endeavors forever
to accomplish may be the one thing that grants one's existence
meaning. While Simon's vain endeavor inspires great pathos in
readers it is also one of the few remaining signs that Simon lives. One
could contend, in other words, that the root roots Simon's
existence and is not simply an obstacle that must be overcome. The
poet-narrator's inclusion of "seems" suggests that he
recognizes this troubling possibility but only too late. The ease with
which the poet-narrator severs the tangled root would confirm what Simon
may already have suspected, that he is old and weak and so near death.
More dramatically stated, if the root stands for Simon's
life-thread then the poet-narrator plays the role of Atropos, one of the
three Moriae or Fates who cuts the thread of life. Simon welcomes the
poet-narrator's aid but then is forced to bear the
poet-narrator's symbolic announcement of his death.
This is an unpleasant suggestion, but the view that the
poet-narrator is reliably responsive to Simon's needs has led to
some selective quotation by readers of the poem. Don Bialostosky, for
example, in Making Tales, which takes "Simon Lee" as a point
of departure in its discussion of Wordsworth's narrative
experiments, writes: "The warm thanks are evident enough in the way
Simon's 'thanks and praises' are described running
'So fast out of his heart.'" (13) Despite
Bialostosky's claim that these warm thanks are "evident
enough," he elides from the poem Wordsworth's
poet-narrator's troubling use of the word "seems," which
raises as a question the poet-narrator's confidence to relay to the
reader what he thinks Simon's tears signify. In the language of the
apostrophe the poet-narrator adopts the role of a benign pedagogue but
in the closing lines of the poem the poet-narrator "seems"
uncomfortable with his ability to narrate the significance of the
incident he describes, though it may be the poet-narrator's
difficulty narrating the incident that grants the incident significance.
(14)
Wordsworth's poems often remain stubbornly silent at those
moments one most wishes for them to "speak," to disclose their
meaning and narrow the possible range of interpretations. While the
language of Wordsworth's poetry is famously reserved and reticent,
John F. Danby's reading of the poem, from The Simple Wordsworth,
remains the accepted one:
"Simon Lee" exists as a poem, I think, to carry these lines [the
concluding four] to the reader in the precise way it does: with the
weight, the depth, the soberness, the measured seriousness and
overflowing tenderness that they have. It exists, that is, to
ensure the "comprehensiveness in thinking and feeling" which
Wordsworth thought the great poet should possess and the good
reader acquire. (15)
Though one does not know definitively why the poet-narrator mourns,
one assumes that the incident together with or perhaps as a result of
Simon's simple expressions affects the poet-narrator powerfully;
the incident has a power to which the poet-narrator wishes to testify.
The poem aims to transmit this affect to the reader. The power may be
the result of the emotions expressed by Simon or the moral outrage--to
the point of disgust--the poet-narrator seems to feel toward a society
that allows its members to exist in such a state of poverty. (16) The
power may even result from the poet-narrator's belated recognition
of the negative significance of the action he has performed. Each of
these suggestions, however, and there are others not pursued here,
assumes that the poet-narrator experiences strong feelings in response
to the incident. The assumption is (and has been) that the
poet-narrator, following Danby, exists as a model of "thinking and
feeling" that the good reader should emulate.
The conclusion to the poem, however, complicates such a feeling. As
R. F. Storch notes in "Wordsworth's Experimental
Ballads," the final stanza of the poem begins with a stock
eighteenth-century idea, that ingratitude causes one to mourn.
Wordsworth quickly overturns the conventional idea with the suggestion
that it is not ingratitude that the poet-narrator mourns but gratitude.
Just as the apostrophe to the reader takes readers by surprise and
frustrates expectations, so too does the poet-narrator's turn from
convention in the final lines of the poem. He does not simply rehearse
the poetic conventions of the past. He surprises readers with his
willingness to overturn poetic convention and seems only more sincere as
a result. However, as Storch also notes, the use of "Alas!"
introduces a bit of play acting at the most emotionally intense moment
of the poem and so raises some troubling questions. (17) It may always
be those expressions meant to convey sincerity that seem all too
calculated and so, at least to some degree, insincere for that very
reason. Such is the risk of "Oh" or "Alas!" in any
lyric poem, a risk staged repeatedly by romantic poems. If the
poet-narrator of "Simon Lee" is willing to play with the
reader's emotions at the moment that one assumes is to carry great
emotional import, how reliable is this poet-narrator? How affected has
he been by his encounter with Simon Lee? Or, how affected is his
response to this encounter?
If one questions the reliability of the poet-narrator, then some
minor details of Wordsworth's language come into focus. Registering
a turn inward by the poet-narrator, the final four lines attempt to
punctuate the lesson he has learned. The dash marks some minimal degree
of separation between the poet-narrator and the experience he relates,
between the incident itself and the poet-narrator's reflection on
the incident he records in the poem. Typographically, the dash marks the
temporal delay that makes possible the psychological distance Wordsworth
elsewhere in his preface to Lyrical Ballads links to poetic production.
This emotional or psychological distance is intensified by the
poet-narrator's diction. While the poet-narrator has heard of
unkind hearts, his use of "oftner" in the last line of the
poem implies that this is not the first time that he has encountered the
gratitude of men and experienced the mourning that these encounters
produce in him. The poet-narrator very quickly takes Simon's tears
as a type of response, one that he has encountered numerous times
before. He compares Simon's specific expressions of gratitude with
those of others and compares the intensity of the experience of mourning
he feels with past experiences of mourning that he has felt. The force
of the emotional response seems to come from the poet-narrator's
surprise, but "oftner" introduces a calculating mind and an
emotional or psychological distance at what one assumes is the most
affectively powerful moment of the poem.
In pursuing such a reading, other complicating questions are
raised. The final two lines ("Alas! the gratitude of men / Has
oftner left me mourning") seem meant to counter the two preceding
ones ("I've heard of hearts unkind, kind deeds / With coldness
still returning"), arguing that expressions of gratitude might be
more powerful than expressions of ingratitude. However, it is also
possible to read these last two lines as referring back to Simon's
possibly histrionic expressions of gratitude. The final lines, then,
suggest that despite their effusiveness Simon's expressions of
gratitude leave little impression on the poet-narrator. In this case,
"oftner" compares the gratitude of Simon with the gratitude of
other men, and the poet-narrator finds Simon's expressions of
gratitude lacking. They carry little force. Rewriting the line slightly
may help this alternative reading to emerge: Alas, the gratitude of
other men has oftner left me mourning. Such a reading presents a very
different poet-narrator than has been identified in the critical
literature that surrounds the poem. This is a poet-narrator who is
perhaps overly cynical, perhaps even unhealthily immune to others'
tears. It is a reading of the poem consistent, however, with
Wordsworth's all too theatrical inclusion of "Alas!"
In reflecting on the incident, two competing senses of it emerge:
the incident was powerfully felt and strangely unaffecting. In this way
the poem performs the dilemma of interpretation that tranquility may
occasion. Readers view the poet-narrator reflecting on the incident, but
in the process the poet-narrator becomes less, not more, in control of
his own responses to it. The final lines suggest the existence of a
conflict within the poet-narrator. The poem presents, in other words, a
poet-narrator, like Wordsworth himself in The Prelude, who struggles
with two "consciousnesses" within himself. The poem, as a
result, performs and bears witness to the sort of self-alienation
Wordsworth describes with "tranquility" in his preface to
Lyrical Ballads, a self-alienation that Wordsworth's poems very
well may work to produce in readers in order to counteract the craving
for the extraordinary incident whose impact is palpably felt but robbed
of force for that very reason.
In this didactic poem, the poet-narrator testifies to the power of
incidents as tales. He celebrates the power--the lyric potential--of the
most unremarkable of events, and readers are invited to make a tale of
the incident he relays. But if the final lines of the poem suggest,
however obliquely, that the poet-narrator's response to Simon
Lee's helplessness is itself problematic, then how are readers to
respond to the apostrophe, which calls for the reader to respond to the
incident? When the poet-narrator asks the reader in the apostrophe to
make a tale of the incident, is he asking readers to respond as he
responded or is he asking readers to respond differently? Is "Simon
Lee" meant to instruct readers of sensational ballads how to engage
properly with their own emotional experiences or is "Simon
Lee" meant to warn readers not to respond as coldly, in quite so
unsympathetic a manner, as the poet-narrator when he compares
Simon's gratitude to the gratitude of others?
Two seemingly incompatible readings are staged in the concluding
lines of the poem. On the one hand, the poet-narrator gives voice to
Simon's condition and in testifying to the force of Simon's
expressions of gratitude he also testifies to the force of even the
simplest everyday encounter. Here, the lyric triumphs over the
sensational ballad. The force of the incident is transmitted to the
reader who is reminded that feeling may not be the same as
sensationalism or sentimentalism. A "tale" has been related
but it is not one the reader was expecting, though it may be all the
more powerful for that fact. On the other hand, if the final lines are
read as referring back to Simon's expressions of gratitude, if they
compare Simon's gratitude with the gratitude of other men, then the
poet-narrator is testifying not to the force of Simon's simple
expressions but to their powerlessness. Simon's expressions of
gratitude fail to evoke in the poet-narrator an emotional response.
Here, the poem would seem to testify to the danger of making tales of
everything.
A Blunted Mind
The closing lines of the poem hinge on the reader's ability to
determine whether or not the poet-narrator is conscious of the
complexity of what he says with "Alas! the gratitude of men / Has
oftner left me mourning." If the reader is to model him or herself
on the poet-narrator, then the fact that the poem's rhetoric
stutters around the act it describes reveals a potential problem with
the very possibility of repetition on which such modeling depends. The
opening line of the concluding stanza features two different rhetorical
schemes that foreground repetition. The lines, "I've heard of
hearts unkind, kind deeds / With coldness still returning" (101-2),
are somewhat cumbersome. Many readers stumble on the awkward movement
from "hearts unkind" to "kind deeds." The difficult
rhythm of the poet-narrator's language may give voice to his own
surprise. Like Simon, the poet-narrator has been robbed of the ability
to speak fluidly and without effort. But the intrusion of rhetoric here
at the end of the poem is remarkable and Wordsworth's specific use
of paronomasia and polyptoton suggests another reading. In moving from
paronomasia to polyptoton, Wordsworth moves from a scheme where the
similar sounds of words are at play ("heard" and
"hearts"), to one in which the same root word is repeated but
in a different form ("unkind" and "kind"). The
progression from (weak) paronomasia to polyptoton suggests a focus on
the root word, which is all too conspicuous given the
poet-narrator's ability to sever roots with one blow. In moving
from "unkind" to "kind," the poet-narrator, it
seems, is looking to focus attention on the root, a root
("kind") that is also central to the apostrophe that divides
the poem: "What more I have to say is short, / I hope you'll
kindly take it" (77-78). If, as I suggest, the poem leaves readers
unsure of whether or not to repeat the poet-narrator's gestures and
sentiments, it is hardly a coincidence that the conclusion of the poem
should focus attention on the question of repetition through the
employment of two rhetorical schemes, especially if the second
(polyptoton) consists of circling, in this case, somewhat cumbersomely,
around a root. The rhetoric of the poem returns readers to the action of
the poem, the severing of the root, which is repeated linguistically by
the comma that divides "unkind" from "kind." The
poet-narrator's language registers, though without his seemingly
becoming conscious of it, some awareness of the strangeness of his
action. Here may be one clue that Wordsworth and the poet-narrator
should not be collapsed too quickly into one and the same figure. The
language of the poet-narrator registers a resistance to what he says.
That this resistance is carried forward to the reader, that it becomes
legible for the reader even though it remains outside of (or beyond) the
consciousness of the poet-narrator testifies to the difficulty of
knowing for sure whether readers should strive to emulate the
poet-narrator or abstract a poet's promise behind that of the
poet-narrator.
If, as Wordsworth suggests in his preface to Lyrical Ballads, the
craving for extraordinary incidents produces a blunted mind, then what
are readers to make of this incident with which Simon Lee is concerned?
For Sigmund Freud, an incident must be inscribed within a narrative in
order for psychological health to be maintained or, in the face of
traumatic events, restored. And yet, at the same time, Freud
acknowledges--in a text like Beyond the Pleasure Principle--that to
construct a narrative is always possibly a way not to encounter various
incidents, a way to evade the incidents with which one no longer wishes
to struggle. (18) In closing, I want to suggest that "Simon
Lee" is at best ambiguous about the desire to make incidents into
tales, to make a tale of everything; such a desire becomes, in the light
of the poem's closing lines and the questions they raise about the
ability of the poet-narrator to respond to Simon's tears, a
potential symptom of the blunted mind Wordsworth diagnoses in his
preface. The result of making tales of everything may be the cold
deafness the poet-narrator exhibits.
The poet-narrator's language undermines (or at least
questions) the lesson the encounter is meant to pass on to the reader.
It simplifies the poem too much to replace the sympathetic poet-narrator
(one perhaps modeled on Wordsworth himself and one to whom readers of
the poem have responded) with a more cold-hearted poet-narrator, in
pointing to (and pointing out) the poet-narrator's resistance to
the encounter with Simon Lee as lie relays it to the reader, a
resistance made legible in the closing lines. To deny the
poet-narrator's resistance (however minimal it may be) to the force
of the encounter he records risks missing the way the poet-narrator
opposes his own reading (or understanding) of the encounter. Language
continues to act even when the consciousness of the poet-narrator holds
short. "Alas!"--I argue--acknowledges the force of a
transmission not necessarily available to consciousness, but one legible
nonetheless; the re-performance of the central event of the poem on the
level of the signifier marks not only the intensity of the encounter but
also the poet-narrator's resistance--even as a form of
self-defense--to it. What is passed on to the reader is not only the
force of the encounter with Simon Lee but also the poet-narrator's
resistance to this force; the language of the poem passes on what the
poet-narrator does not wish to describe: his own resistance to the
incident in which Simon Lee is concerned. The language used to describe
an experience may always tell others more than one wishes them to know
about.
Readers are left stranded somewhere between taking the
poet-narrator as an example--to the extent that he exhibits the kind of
emotional response Wordsworth is looking to produce in readers of his
poems--or as a counter-example--to the extent that he suffers from an
inability to hear Simon's gratitude or witness his suffering. The
poet-narrator, in addressing his imagined reader, invites readers to
make a tale of the incident, but it is unclear whether or not making a
tale results in humanitarian aid or a repetition of the
poet-narrator's deafness to Simon's expression of gratitude, a
deafness marked by his comparison of Simon's gratitude with the
gratitude of others.
Read in this light, and given Wordsworth's description of the
blunted modern mind, the poet-narrator serves as a reminder that the
craving for incidents (however ordinary or extraordinary) may lead not
to appropriate action but to paralysis, deafness, coldness: a failure to
see, a failure to witness the suffering of another. Not to hear the
warning Wordsworth subtly introduces in the final lines by opening the
possibility that the poet-narrator is more interested in how
Simon's gratitude compares with the gratitude of others is to miss
the possibility that the making of tales risks the paralysis that
Wordsworth's poetic project is meant to counteract. It is difficult
to know, in other words, whether the poet-narrator (and the encounter he
describes in "Simon Lee") serves as a means to counter the
dilemma Wordsworth identifies in his preface or if the poet-narrator
suffers from the demands of modernity in characterizing Simon's
expressions as somehow lacking in force. "Simon Lee" places
readers in an uncomfortable double-bind: if one does not make a tale of
this incident one is in danger of turning away from the means to counter
the blunted mind Wordsworth describes; and yet, in making a tale of the
incident one risks repeating the poet-narrator's failure to respond
adequately to Simon's need. One risks repeating the
poet-narrator's turn from Simon. In other words, in making a tale
of the incident, one is also in danger of satisfying the craving for
extraordinary incidents symptomatic of what Wordsworth calls the blunted
mind.
As a result, the poem complicates Enlightenment ideals of civic
responsibility that are governed by the assumption that appropriate
political or ethical action follows from an increase in knowledge. This
may also be true of the increase in feeling. In perfecting the
transmission of knowledge and in eliminating the possibility of
ignorance one eliminates inappropriate political and ethical actions. In
Lyrical Ballads Wordsworth worries that the opposite is true: the proper
political and ethical response is not guaranteed by the exponential
increase in information, intelligence, or emotion. As more and more
information of historical events is transmitted with greater and greater
speed the mind becomes less (not more) able to process it. "Simon
Lee" suggests that this may also be true of information about the
suffering of others and the most immediate emotional responses
available.
In a poem like "Simon Lee," Wordsworth acknowledges that
sympathy, sympathetic identification, while necessary to the project of
the humanitarian protest poem and even the larger poetic project of
Lyrical Ballads, is always possibly a form of resistance, a symptom of
the blunted mind he diagnoses in the preface and no guarantee of
right-minded humanitarian action. In presenting readers of the poem with
a poet-narrator who seems both engaged by and disengaged from the tale
of suffering he tells, Wordsworth poses a question that is difficult to
acknowledge, let alone answer: what if the failure of sympathy (and
humanitarian action) results not from the failure of images or texts to
inspire powerful feeling, but from the success of images and texts to
inspire powerful feelings and so satisfy a craving for extraordinary
incidents that leads to apathy and emotional detachment? As images of
suffering come to dominate the news media, this may be just the sort of
question most in need of an answer. But the strong need for an answer to
this question may go a long way toward helping one understand why the
final lines of "Simon Lee" have not occasioned the
disagreement for which they call. For better or worse, one often knows
enough not to acknowledge the questions one does not know enough to
answer.
Clemson University
(1.) William Wordsworth, Lyrical Ballads (New York: Roudedge, 2005)
307. Future references to "Simon Lee, the Old Huntsman, with an
incident in which he was concerned" will be to this edition.
"Simon Lee" can be found on pages 105-8.
(2.) Noel Jackson, "Rethinking the Cultural Divide: Walter
Pater, Wilkie Collins, and the Legacies of Wordsworthian
Aesthetics," Modern Philology 102.2 (2004): 209-34 (216). Jackson
specifically footnotes David Lloyd and Paul Thomas from Culture and the
State (New York: Routledge, 1998): "The narrative by which poetry
transforms the disintegrative effect of the multiplying shocks of modern
experience into a principled phenomenology of perception in turn
replicates the universal history of man's progression from
'savage torpor' to true culture" (78).
(3.) William Wordsworth, The Prelude: 1799, 1805, 1850, eds.
Jonathan Wordsworth, M. H. Abrams and Stephen Gill (New York: Norton,
1979) 66.
(4.) See also, Thomas Keenan, "Publicity and
Indifference," PMLA 117.1 (2002): 104-16 and Luc Boltanski, Distant
Suffering: Morality, Media and Politics, trans. Graham Burchell
(Cambridge: Cambridge UP, 1999).
(5.) Geoffrey Hartman, The Longest Shadow: In the Aftermath of the
Holocaust (Bloomington: Indiana UP, 1996) 100. In Regarding the Pain of
Others (New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2003), Susan Sontag returns
to this idea that she first pursued in On Photography (1977).
Summarizing her position in On Photography, she writes, "in a world
saturated, no hyper-saturated with images, those that should matter have
a diminishing effect: we become callous. In the end, such images just
make us a little less able to feel, to have our conscience pricked"
(105). Now, Sontag wonders if this is true: "I thought it was when
I wrote [On Photography]. I'm not so sure now" (105). She
warns that "it is absurd to identify the world with those zones in
the well-off countries where people have the dubious privilege of being
spectators, or of declining to be spectators, of other people's
pain, just as it is absurd to generalize about the ability to respond to
the sufferings of others on the basis of the mind-set of those consumers
of news who know nothing at first hand about war and massive injustice
and terror" (110-11). For her short discussion of Wordsworth, see
106-7.
(6.) Giorgio Agamben, Infancy and History: On the Destruction of
Experience, trans. Liz Heron (New York: Verso, 1993) 13.
(7.) The Poetical Words of William Wordsworth, eds. Ernest de
Selincourt and Helen Darbishire, 5 vols. (Oxford: Clarendon, 1940-49)
4.413. Andrew L. Griffin makes a similar point in "Wordsworth and
the problem of the Imaginative Story: The Case of 'Simon
Lee'" PMLA 92.3 (1977): 392-409.
(8.) As Griffin writes, the "apology, or charge, to the reader
can thus be welcomed as the death rattle of a story-monger and the birth
of a poet. In the end, 'Simon Lee' finds itself ... as a
Wordsworthian lyric: three stanzas of deeply felt recollection finding
unusual meaning, scarcely to be articulated, in an ordinary event"
(401). See also Garrett Stewart's discussion of "Simon
Lee" in the opening pages of the second chapter of Dear Reader: The
Conscripted Audience in Nineteenth-Century British Fiction (Baltimore:
Johns Hopkins UP, 1996). Stewart writes: the "passive ...
consumption of narrative is acknowledged by Wordsworth only to be
rebuked and cured" (26).
(9.) Stephen M. Parrish, The Art of the "Lyrical Ballads"
(Cambridge, MA: Harvard UP, 1973) x.
(10.) James H. Averill, Wordsworth and the Poetry of Human
Suffering (Ithaca: Cornell UP, 1980) 164-65.
(11.) These are questions often raised by critics of
Sentimentalism. For general discussions of Sentimentalism, see Janet
Todd, Sentimentalism: An Introduction (London: Methuen, 1986); and Chris
Jones, Radical Sensibility: Literature and Ideas in the 1790s (London:
Routledge, 1993). For more specific readings of the relation between
Wordsworth and Sentimentalism, see Averill, Wordsworth and the Poetry of
Human Suffering. For more on questions of Wordsworth and philanthropy,
see James O'Rourke, "'Goody Blake and Harry Gill,'
'The Thorn,' and the Failure of Philanthropy," European
Romantic Review 9 (1998): 103-23 and J. Andrew Hubbell,
"Wordsworth's Excursion in Romantic Philanthropy,"
European Romantic Review 18 (2007): 43-68.
(12.) Karen Swann, "Suffering and Sensation in The Ruined
Cottage," PMLA 106.1 (1991): 83-95 (84). For a related discussion
of Keats and sensation, see Orrin N. C. Wang, "Coming Attractions:
Lamia and Cinematic Sensation," SiR 42.4 (Winter 2003): 461-500.
(13.) Don Bialostosky, Making Tales: The Poetics of
Wordsworth's Narrative Experiments (Chicago: U of Chicago P, 1984)
76.
(14.) The continuation of the line does not necessarily clear up
the confusion: "I thought they never would have done." Most
readers take "done" as "finished" or
"concluded," but one might read "done" as in "I
thought the tears would never accomplish what they were to
accomplish." In this reading, the poet-narrator does not so much
take the tears as a sign that Simon Lee is overcome by an overflow of
powerful feeling but a sign of Simon's calculating mind; the
poet-narrator subtly insinuates that the tears have been produced by
Simon Lee with some strategic end in mind, which registers a high degree
of resistance within the poet-narrator to the event that he describes.
(15.) John F. Danby, The Simple Wordsworth (London: Routledge and
Kegan Paul, 1960) 38.
(16.) See also Arnd Bohm, "Nimrod and Wordsworth's
'Simon Lee': Habits of Tyranny," Romanticism 8.2 (2002):
131-60.
(17.) R. F. Storch, "Wordsworth's Experimental Ballads:
The Radical Uses of Intelligence and Comedy," Studies in English
Literature 1500-1900 11.4 (1971): 621-39.
(18.) I am thinking in particular of Freud's definition of the
origin of consciousness: "Protection against stimuli is an almost
more important function for the living organism than reception of
stimuli." Sigmund Freud, Beyond the Pleasure Principle, trans.
James Strachey (New York: Norton, 1961) 30.