The embodiment of grief: passion and rhetoric in Coleridge and the "new rhetoricians".
Ruttkay, Veronika
In 1802, the young Coleridge made the following observation to
Sotheby: "every metaphor, every personification, should have its
justifying cause in some passion either of the Poet's mind, or of
the Characters described by the poet" (LL 2:812). (1) The link
between passions and figures was not Coleridge's invention:
widespread in the 18th century, it was first forged by classical
rhetoric, and already then it was some what ambiguous. The orator wanting to raise strong feelings in his audience employed figurative
language--and, in turn, such language was interpreted as evidence of his
own passionate state. Figures, therefore, could be understood as both
causes and effects of passions, leaving open the question of precedence:
are passions in some measure effects of rhetoric, or is rhetoric an
effect of passion? The fact that neither of these possibilities was
discarded resulted in an all-important circularity whereby figures of
speech became essential to accounts of the transmission of feeling.
Later-18th-century philosophers and rhetoricians still preserved this
fruitful ambiguity while rephrasing and extending the traditional view,
with the help of the modern doctrine of the association of ideas. The
transmission of feeling was no longer regarded as a task pertaining to
the orator only; as sympathy, it became the fundamental dynamic of all
forms of social behaviour. Earlier concepts of rhetoric and especially
rhetorical figures--were employed to throw light on a range of different
areas. Adam Potkay convincingly argues that Hume explained religion on a
rhetorical basis in The Natural History of Religion, and even his
epistemology can be interpreted as a "rhetorical philosophy."
(2) While relying on rhetoric, Hume assigned passion a central place in
his model of the mind, going as far as asserting that what had
previously been called reason was nothing else but "calm
passion."
Partly in response to Hume's account of the mind,
understanding the mechanism of passions gained new urgency in the second
half of the 18th century. (3) Literary criticism--to use a modern term
for something much more diffuse--offered a unique opportunity for such
investigation. As Lord Kames asserted in his Elements of Criticism,
studying the principles of art opened "a direct avenue to the heart
of man." (4) In analyses of literary texts, both rhetorical and
psychological questions could be raised in an immediate way, and the two
inquiries could merge in a seamless unity. Drama proved especially
important, since it displayed the workings of the strongest passions,
and besides, in the writings of moral philosophers theatre had already
served as an influential model for the sympathetic transmission of
feeling. Some of the most intriguing criticism of Shakespeare in the
second half of the 18th century evolved from these complex concerns, and
whether it appeared in rhetorical treatises or in books on
"criticism," it had a bearing on wider issues of moral
philosophy. Indeed, to a great extent it was the work of moral
philosophers whom James Engell also calls the "new
rhetoricians." (5) Psychology of the passions and rhetoric go hand
in hand in their writing and, although in a more implicit manner, they
are still paired in Coleridge's lectures. In the present essay I am
going to focus on the relationship of Coleridge's criticism to the
"new rhetoric": (6) after a preliminary discussion of
Coleridge and Kames (one of the most influential "new
rhetoricians"), I shall focus on a passage from Coleridge's
lectures which will be understood as a response to Kames and his
followers. My assumption is that for Coleridge, similarly to the
"new rhetoricians," these two areas (psychology of the
passions and rhetoric) are two sides of the same coin; the paper itself
is intended to show some of the consequences of this unity in
Coleridge's reading of Shakespeare. But let me first describe the
relationship between my main concepts: passion, the body, and figures of
rhetoric.
I
In his lectures, Coleridge simultaneously paid tribute to
Shakespeare and criticised modern poetry on grounds very similar to
those of Kames and other "new rhetoricians." As he asserted in
1811, "all deviations from ordinary language must be justified by
some passion which renders it natural" (271). Modern poets cannot
achieve naturalness because they fail to observe this rule, whereas the
earlier English authors were still aware of it. Apart from Shakespeare,
Milton too managed to naturalize "deviations" of rhetoric into
fine poetry, since he was willing to observe the "law of
passion." This latter phrase of Coleridge's has scientific
connotations, some of which were already spelt out by earlier authors
who treated the principle of association (underlying the mechanism of
passionate language) as corresponding to "laws of nature,"
like gravitation. (7) At the same time, phrases like
"justification" and the "observing" of
"laws," so prominent in the "new rhetoricians,"
evoke a legal discourse. In Coleridge, this can be detected almost
everywhere, from his early remark to Sotheby to his 1812 lecture on
Milton. Milton, he said,
subjected his style to the passions--bending and accommodating
itself alternately from the slow thinking and reflecting movement,
to the hurrying step of revenge, the stately proclamation of pride,
and the equal course of immovable courage. (1:402)
In this passage, the passions are represented as law-givers to
which Milton's style is "subjected"--but interestingly,
this process also produces the "subjects" of Milton's
poem. These poetical subjects are, for Coleridge, themselves passions or
states of mind: "revenge," "pride," and
"courage," as well as the slow "movement" of
thinking and reflection. Interestingly, Coleridge does not name the
characters to whom these attributes and actions "belong."
Although he is probably referring to Satan, the point is that this
reference is obscured, because he describes "the passions" as
the real agents represented in Milton's poetry, not only as the
forces that govern his style. Indeed, the two aspects are hard to
disentangle; Milton's style is subjected to its subject: passion.
Coleridge himself participates in the rhetorical "figuring" of
passions when he refers to their physical attributes ("hurrying
step," "stately proclamation," etc.), in effect
personifying the passions. The technique of making passion the subject
of poetry, but also making it a "subject" by personifying it,
is familiar from the 18th-century poetic tradition, and is the master
trope of Collins's ode "The Passions," which had a strong
influence on the young Coleridge. (8) The same type of personification
was present in dramatic criticism before Coleridge, as in Joanna
Baillie's "'Introductory Discourse' to Her Plays on
the Passions," in which she speaks of the "wild tossings of
despair; the gnashing of hatred and revenge; the yearnings of affection,
and the softened mien of love." (9) In all these instances what can
be witnessed is the intention of depicting "inner"
psychological processes, together with the necessity of having recourse
to images of the body, of movement and of rhythm, while doing so.
Passion is as strongly bound up with the body, as it is with rhetoric.
This conjunction between passion and embodiment can also be
detected in Milton's famous dictum that poetry is "simple,
sensuous, and passionate," a phrase which in Coleridge's hands
was turned into a prescription and a touchstone whenever he spoke of
good and bad poetry. In the above-quoted tribute to Milton, for
instance, he clearly applied these very criteria to the poetry of their
inventor: he emphasised both the "passionate" and the
"sensuous" aspect of Milton's style, both essential to
what I am going to refer to as the "embodied" aspect of
language. On other occasions, he went into more detail about the three
adjectives. (10) In 1813, the Bristol Gazette reported him saying the
following:
To judge with fairness of an Author's works, we must observe
firstly, what is essential, and secondly, what arises from
circumstances.--It is essential, as Milton defines it, that poetry
be simple, sensuous, and impassionate Simple, that it may appeal to
the elements and the primary laws of our nature: sensuous, since it
is only by sensuous images that we can elicit truth as at a flash:
impassionate, since images must be vivid, in order to move our
passions and awaken our affections. (1:515)
Coleridge here defines poetry in a psychological framework,
focusing on the psyche of the reader. The aim of poetry is to make
readers perceive truth "as at a flash" (i.e. not analytically)
and to "move our passions and awaken our affections." Both can
be achieved by an appeal to the senses, to the passive and receptive in
human nature (in the Biographia, the "sensuous" is associated
with passivity). (11) Sensuous "vivid images" awaken passions,
and themselves may be the products of passion, as 18th-century moral
philosophy asserted. 18th-century "new rhetoric," in turn,
claimed that the power of creating "vivid images" in language
belongs to rhetoric. (12) Their stance, however, had its own
ambivalence, since their endeavour sprang from a need to move beyond
traditional rules and concepts of rhetoric. As noted by literary
historians, their work fits into a larger pattern of moving away from
rhetoric towards poetics, even in their very attempt to
"justify" rhetorical figures on a psychological basis. (13) As
I would like to show, Coleridge's criticism is one step further
away from the framework of classical rhetoric, but he does not efface
rhetoric altogether. His attitude might be described in the words of J.
Douglas Kneale as that of "romantic aversion": a simultaneous
turning away from and turning towards rhetoric, in order to make it work
in new ways. (14) Coleridge's extensive reliance on Milton's
three words from "Of Education" is significant in this context
too: in the treatise, Milton proposes poetry to be the final, crowning
achievement of education, preceded only by the study of rhetoric (as the
easier subject), "[t]o which Poetry would be made subsequent, or
indeed rather precedent, as being lesse suttle and fine, but more
simple, sensuous and passionate." (15) On the one hand, Milton here
clearly states the worth of poetry in comparison with the "suttle
and fine" (i.e., thin) rhetoric: poetry is of a higher value
because it is fuller, one might say, more embodied. On the other hand,
however, he asserts that its teaching must rely on the previous
knowledge of rhetoric, hence the hesitation between
"subsequent" and "precedent." As I would like to
show, Coleridge inherits from Milton not only the privileging of poetry
but also the reliance on rhetoric in his lectures. He transforms or even
displaces rhetoric, but its traces are preserved throughout his
criticism.
"New rhetoricians" like Kames and Priestley examined
Shakespeare's style according to a "rhetoric of passion."
The plays offered almost infinite opportunities to study psychology in
relation to rhetoric: to trace the workings of the stronger passions
together with their (adequate or faulty) expression. In my
interpretation, one of Coleridge's aims in his lectures was to take
up these investigations and to rephrase them in terms of his own
"philosophical criticism." Importantly, the term
"philosophical criticism" had been used earlier by Priestley
to refer to his own work; what is more, evidence suggests that it was
associated with a whole brand of criticism, which seems more or less to
cover the work of Engell's "new rhetoricians." (16) In
the work of Lord Kames, as well as in that of several other "new
rhetoricians," we find a treatment of rhetorical figures one by one
(e.g. metaphor, simile, etc.), defining the conditions of their
appropriate usage, and discussing examples of each--very often from
Shakespeare. Coleridge frequently does the reverse: he discusses a play,
and stops in order to call attention to a characteristic figure--and, to
use a Coleridgean phrase, to "philosophize" it. He intends
"not to pass any of the important conceits in Shakespeare"
(1:312). But sometimes a particular figure is associated by him not only
with a state of passion, but also with a figure in the sense of
"character." Moreover, it seems as if these figures were
"figuring" some fundamental questions or dilemmas related to
the "language of passion." One of these is the figure of Grief
represented by Constance in Shakespeare's King John--the rhetorical
figure related to her is personification which, as I have already
intimated, has a special relevance to discussions of the passions. The
question posed by her speech for the "new rhetoricians" as
well as for Coleridge concerns the limits of expression: are there any
passions beyond expression? And, more generally, what is the
relationship between passion and expression?
II
"Strong Passions commend figurative Language & act as
stimulants" (1:86), wrote Coleridge in 1808. At this point in his
notes, we find a series of epigrammatic statements about criticism and
poetic language, all of which will be developed later on in the
lectures. Following the quoted remark, there is a reminder: "German
bad Tragedies ridiculed--in which the Dramatist becomes a Novellist in
his directions to the actors, & degrades Tragedy to Pantomime"
(1:86). The link with the preceding note is, very probably, that in bad
tragedies (e.g. in Kotzebue), the strong passions are not expressed
through adequate figurative language, the dramatist instead--in the
manner of the sentimental novels--"tells" the actors how they
are supposed to feel, so the actors, through lack of any other means,
convey the feeling through movements. These are the plays Coleridge
ridicules in 1811, which are "so well acted & so ill written
that if the auditor could have produced an artificial deafness he would
have been much pleased with the performance as a pantomime"
(1:351). This is clearly sarcastic, but remarks made elsewhere reveal
that Coleridge accepted the possibility that movement--and especially
dance--can produce the highest pleasure and move the spectator (to echo
the rhetorical term, movere). Discussing different degrees of stage
illusion, he mentions the "mere dance at an Opera which is yet
capable of giving us the highest pleasure, & which, with music &
harmonious motions of the body, can, by thus explaining some tale,
deeply affect and delight an audience" (1:227). In this respect
Coleridge goes along with the spirit of the age in which such non-verbal
forms as the pantomime, the ballet, or the melodrama (initially, musical
drama with little or no speech) rose to prominence in the theatres. (17)
Nevertheless, he believed that the artistry of the poet requires that he
be able to re-create such "movements" in language, through the
dance of figures of speech. The rules of the figures are provided by the
"strong Passions," which are here (as often elsewhere)
regarded as a cause of sorts, though not necessarily a sufficient cause:
they simply "commend" the use of figurative language. But the
nature of this causation is made a bit more problematic by
Coleridge's other word, "stimulants"--a stronger
metaphor, gesturing towards physiology. It suggests that passions
enhance mechanisms that had been there all the while, like figurativity
in language. (18) Moreover, its effects are "bodily," not
under conscious command or "commendation." The metaphor
therefore evokes medical descriptions, like that of Dr Brown in The
Elements of Medicine, or the one Dr Baillie gave of the "unruly
inmates" dramatized in his sister's Plays on the Passions.
(19) Coleridge's approach to the poetic uses of passion wavers
between these two alternatives: passionate language as a result of
conscious artistic choice, and as an involuntary, visceral reaction.
In the 18th century throughout various discursive fields (that of
theatre, medicine, moral philosophy, rhetoric), there seems to have been
a consensus that passions "stimulate" the body simultaneously
with the mind. This is why passions were essential to a number of
accounts problematizing the relationship between the two. According to
one of the most influential theories, they triggered strong trains of
association, which, among other things, offered a new explanation of why
figures of rhetoric (based on similarity or contiguity, also major
"laws" of association) were more likely to appear in
passionate states. A related notion I have already alluded to was that
passions were "contagious": that they circulated between
different experiencing subjects by means of sympathy. Coleridge's
lectures attest that passion and sympathy have a central place in his
theories of criticism. In the 1808 notes, for instance, just before
writing about "stimulation" he is concerned with the reader
and with criticism: "Judging of Books by books, instead of
referring what we read to our own Experience or making it a motive for
Observation--one great use of Books" (86). For Coleridge, books
should be tested against the reader's own experience, most of all,
against the very experience of reading the book. The question he
repeatedly asks is what mental "faculties" and passions are
evoked by a given text. (20) In the opening lecture of the 1811-12
series, he returned to this theme in a broader survey of the
"Causes of false criticism," a discussion of primary
importance, offering a convenient starting point for a comparison of his
general critical stance with that of Kames. Coleridge here employs the
vocabulary of affect when he speaks of the "enormous stimulant
power of Events making the desire to be strongly stimulated almost an
appetite" (1:186, my italics)--an "appetite" being a
passion which precedes its object, and, consequently, is in constant
need of new objects. (21) Also, recent events and "the unexampled Influence of Opinion" "have made us a World of Readers":
all men are "anxious to know what is going on in the world"
(1:186). Coleridge here formulates the radical effects of the emergence
of print culture, his language suggesting how the "World of
Readers" is "reading" a new world into existence
importantly, driven by another passion, the anxiety to know. He also
(somewhat ironically, for a lecturer) mentions the "passion of
public Speaking," and refers to novels--the ubiquitous theme of
18th-century discussions of the often "dangerous" encounter
between text and feeling. It seems, then, that the "false
criticism" of the age is at least in part describable as a
confusion or dysfunction of affects.
Coleridge's proposed remedy is to make readers reflect on
their "own inward experiences," which would, he hoped, result
in a more conscious, and we might say, more rational approach to reading
(as opposed to a taste for reading which he termed an unreflecting "appetite"). But Coleridge does not want to eschew feeling
altogether, far from it. (22) He wants to ground rational critical
response in "proper" feeling--in both senses of the word. On
the one hand, reading that is worthy of its name evokes feeling that is
not an improper "base passion" but part of "our nobler
Nature." (23) On the other hand, this feeling should be proper to
the reader, that is, it should coincide with his or her "inward
experiences." Typically of Coleridge, qualities of the reading text
and of the reading experience are inextricably linked: he proposes a way
to discriminate between good and bad books and between good and bad
reading simultaneously. The discrimination on both counts requires a
constant and fastidious care; in fact Coleridge believes it even painful
initially, so much so that he is ready to count this difficulty among
the permanent causes of false criticism:
The effort & at first the very painful Effort of really
thinking--really referring to our own inward experiences--& the
ease with which we accept as a substitute for this, which can alone
operate a true conviction, the opinions of those about us--which we
have heard or been accustomed to take for granted &c--Shakespeare's
Constance/ & a Mother in real life--yet how many have declared the
first unnatural--& admired the remote Silence of a German Tragedy,
consisting of directions to the actors ... (1:187)
From this passage it seems that one of the permanent causes of
false criticism is the paradoxical nature of criticism itself. Criticism
as an activity is, or can be, a "painful Effort," but
criticism as tradition, as a body of knowledge handed down to us, can be
even worse: unreliable, misleading, or, quite simply, false. Coleridge
implies that this is so not only because previous critics happened to
make the wrong kinds of judgements, but because criticism conceived as
the institution of making judgements on behalf of someone else, of
pre-empting reader response, is erroneous. By re-imagining criticism as
a process rather than a product, Coleridge makes it approximate reading
itself, understood as a self-reflexive activity. In fact it is arguable
that in the lectures generally he fashions himself as a reader, rather
than a critic. (24) In the passage above, he announces his difference
from (false) criticism, and rejects its authority as a finished product
for the sake of the process of reflection on readerly experience.
Ironically enough, though, this gesture of rejection has itself become
part of the critical tradition by Coleridge's time. Grounding
criticism in experience rather than authority is the primary aim of most
thinkers in the Enlightenment tradition, and is also at the heart of
Lord Kames's critical project. In his introduction to Elements of
Criticism, Kames writes about the progress of philosophy and criticism
in terms that are remarkably similar to those of Coleridge:
In later times, happily, reason hath obtained the ascendant: men
now assert their native privilege of thinking for themselves; and
disdain to be ranked in any sect, whatever be the science. I am
forc'd to except criticism, which, by what fatality I know not,
continues to be no less slavish in its principles nor less
submissive to authority, than it was originally. (25)
Kames shares with Coleridge the Enlightenment prerogative of sapere
aude. At the same time he admits that criticism resists this burden of
freedom, and continues to be "slavish" and
"submissive." What he terms a mysterious "fatality"
(the obscurity in criticism that resists Enlightenment) is what
Coleridge analyses as "Causes of False Criticism." We can
conclude that Coleridge's analysis is more subversive because, as
we have seen, it implies a more fundamental critique of criticism
itself. But if we turn to the practical solutions offered by the two
theorists, we find that the one suggested by Kames is quite close to
that of Coleridge: both aim to ground criticism in introspection, in
conscious reflection on experience.
Kames's work can be viewed as an attempt to establish
universal principles of human nature primarily through introspection,
that is, through a reflection on the workings of the psyche, and to
develop a "rational criticism" based on these principles. (26)
Criticism, therefore, involves a rational reflection on what is, to a
large extent, non-rational: the workings of the mind, in which (as in
Hume's scheme) passions play a central role. Kames devotes the
first chapters of Elements of Criticism to such fundamentals as the
principles of association, emotion and passion, which he expounds mainly
from practical examples taken from individual literary texts. Moreover,
he continues to elaborate on the universals of "human nature with
reference to the fine arts" in several other chapters ( like
"On Beauty"), before he turns his attention to practical
criticism. Needless to say, Coleridge would not have subscribed to some
of Kames's "universals," most of all, to his strongly
empiricist concept of mind. Nevertheless he follows a similar critical
route when--from his first 1808 series to at least 1814--he designs his
opening lecture(s) to establish the principles of criticism based on
introspection, and usually examines the critical vocabulary
("taste" and "beauty," among others) in this light.
(27) But if Kames's method was reflexive, then that of Coleridge is
doubly so for, importantly, he regards introspection as a guide in
practical criticism as well. The reader should "measure" the
text against his/her actual inner experience, not only against
principles derived and generalised from a philosophical analysis of such
inner experience. This is a major difference from Kames, and therefore
it is not surprising to find Coleridge arguing with the critical
tradition of Kames exactly at this point. His arguments are spelt out
around the problem of passion and expression, figured by Constance in
Shakespeare's King John.
III
The argument in its fullest form can be found in Collier's
notes of the 1811 lecture. According to this, when complaining of people
who "did not exert their own abilities" but "took for
granted the opinions of others," Coleridge offered the following
anecdote:
This had been the case with a friend of his who observed to him that
he did not think Shakespeare had made Constance in King John speak
the language of nature where she said on the loss of Prince Arthur
Grief fills the room [up] of my absent child
Lies in his bed, walks up and down with me
Puts on his pretty looks, repeats his words
Remembers me of all his gracious parts
Stuffs out his vacant garments with his form;
Then have I reason to be fond of grief?
Within three months after he had made this remark the friend died.
Coleridge went to see his mother an ignorant tho' amiable woman who
had scarcely heard the name of Shakespeare much less read him.
Coleridge like King Philip in the Play alluded to, attempted to
Console her & in reply in the bitter anguish of her grief she
uttered almost a parody on the language of Shakespeare employing
the same thoughts & a little varied in the phrazeology. (1:192-3)
In order to see the full import of this strange story, we need to
know that Constance's speech (King John, 3.4.93ff) had been a
matter of critical debate for decades. In Elements of Criticism, Kames
found it especially artificial--and therefore faulty. Like a passage in
Richard III (4.4.9ff), it was "undoubtedly in a bad taste." In
both cases, "[i]magery and figurative expression are discordant, in
the highest degree, with the agony of a mother"; they employ
"language too light or airy for a severe passion." However, it
is difficult to say whether Coleridge is actually referring to
Kames's "false" opinion, or to other people influenced by
him--and there were plenty of them, given the popularity of his work.28
Someone close to the young Coleridge was Joseph Priestley who in his
Lectures on Oratory and Criticism (1777) reiterated several of
Kames's points, and repeated many of his examples. His main
criterion of judgement was also the adequacy of passionate language:
Writers not really feeling the passions they describe, and not
being masters of the natural expression of them, are apt, without
their being aware of it, to make persons under the influence of a
strong emotion or passion, speak in a manner that is very
unsuitable to it. Sometimes, for instance, they seem rather to be
describing the passion of another, than expressing their own. (29)
The "impropriety," as Priestley calls it, of describing
passion instead of expressing it, is most characteristic of French
dramatists. Yet,
Even our Shakespeare himself, though no writer whatever hath
succeeded so well in the language of the passions, is sometimes
deserving of censure in this respect; as when Constance, in King
John, says to the messenger that brought her a piece of
disagreeable news,
Fellow, be gone, I cannot brook thy sight:
This news hath made thee a most ugly man.
The sentiment and expression in the former line is perfectly
natural, but that in the latter resembles too much the comment of a
cool observer. Of the same kind, but much more extravagant, is the
following passage, which is part of the speech of Constance, giving
her reasons why she indulged her grief for the loss of her son.
(30)
And Priestley goes on to quote the same lines as Kames, and
Coleridge in his lecture.
Given the popularity of the argument and the example, it is
uncertain whether Coleridge was thinking of Priestley, Kames, or someone
influenced by Kames. But he repudiated their critical mistake in an odd
manner, by offering the anecdote about the dead friend. Did he expect
his audience to really believe it? Or was it a cautionary fable, devised
to illustrate the fate of "false criticism" which involved
nothing less than the death of its practitioner? At any rate, it offers
a rhetorical solution to a theoretical problem: Coleridge strengthens
his point by telling a story, supposedly from real life (the speaker
personally involved in the events), with a strong emotional impact. This
is an acceptable, even advisable means of persuasion. However, it is
notable that Coleridge usually reverts to such solutions, and especially
to stories about some "Friend," when he has reasoned himself
into a paradoxical position. The most famous example is the letter in
Chapter 13 of the Biographia, but there are other instances as well.
(31) In this early case too, the "friend" is a figure covering
but also calling attention to contradictory tendencies in
Coleridge's critical discourse. The main question here is: on what
authority can the reader decide whether a specific passage is the
"true" language of passion or not?
Very crudely, Kames's method was first to define the main
characteristics of the passions (through introspection), then the main
features of each major rhetorical figure, and then to compare the two in
a given passage to see whether they coincide or not. As opposed to this,
Coleridge suggests a more direct method: readers should be "really
thinking--really referring to [their] own inward experiences." This
approach is much more flexible: it enables the reader to differentiate
between infinitely subtle "shades" of feeling, while
Kames's method required him to focus on a few major types of
passion (grief, terror, etc.) which gain a specific colouring in each
passage. Coleridge does not set up rules of passion or of rhetoric in
advance; instead, he recasts the reader not only as a critic who
"understands" but also as someone who "experiences":
each passage evokes a subjective response simultaneously with the
unfolding of its verbal structure. This makes the question of critical
judgement so straightforward that it becomes almost superfluous. The
reader's sympathetic response and subsequent recognition that it
coincides with his or her "proper feelings," is enough to
prove that the text in question manifests the true "language of
passion." This is another way to say what has been known for a long
time, that "sympathetic criticism" comes much more naturally
to Coleridge than the censorious "beauties and faults"
approach of earlier critics like Kames. He allows little recourse to
Kames's pre-established categories.
What appears as a straightforward and consistent critical strategy,
however, starts to emerge as much more problematic if we consider how
direct "inward experience" can be used in making public
critical judgements, for instance, in the lecture theatre. In the very
passage where Coleridge recommends grounding criticism in interiority,
he offers as evidence an anecdote which is nothing if not external.
Instead of referring to his own inward experience, he provides a story
of a supposedly real mother in real grief, who repeats Constance's
words. Through this fiction, Coleridge revives Constance to make her
bear witness to Shakespeare's mastery, as if in an imagined
courtroom. My argument is that this rhetorical "trick" is
inevitable. It is the same strategy that we have witnessed in
Coleridge's praise for Milton: in order to speak of passion as a
principle that "governs" language, he needs to personify it,
to clothe it in flesh and blood, which is the work of rhetoric. The
moment Constance is effaced and substituted for an impersonal force in
language, a second "Constance" must appear to utter her words.
"Passion is speaking," this prosopopeia lurks behind the
criticism of the "new rhetoricians," making it (to use a term
revived by recent criticism), a pathopoeia. (32) And the same figure
becomes even more powerful in some of Coleridge's readings of
Shakespeare when--as we shall see--he acknowledges the voice of passion
even where earlier critics had considered it silent.
IV
Kames's rhetorical system contained an inherent contradiction,
characteristic of late-eighteenth-century rhetoric in general. It is
summed up conveniently by Ian Thomson in his "Rhetoric and the
Passions, 1760-1800": "rhetoric is, according to one major
definition, the art of persuasion, and one of its resources is to move
its audience, and figurative speech assists this end: on the other hand,
genuine passion is supposed not to resort to figures, which are now seen
as artifice." (33) The artificial status of rhetoric is going to
haunt Romantic thinking--Wordsworth condemns it as "poetic
diction" but in the Preface he also admits that figures can be the
natural expression of passions. (34) Coleridge in the lectures seems to
be more firmly on rhetoric's side, but he needs a system of
rhetoric--and a psychology--more flexible than that of Kames. One thing
that Kames and several of his contemporaries take for granted is that
there are two main kinds of passion: those that are favourable to
(figurative) expression, and those that are not. In other words, there
is a natural rule or limit, determining what feelings can and what
feelings cannot be expressed. The terrain of inexpressible emotion is
reigned over by the passion of grief. As Kames writes in the opening of
his chapter entitled "Language of Passion": "A man
immoderately grieved seeks to afflict himself, rejecting all
consolation: immoderate grief accordingly is mute" (494). But grief
is not alone a mute emotion. "Surprise and terror are silent
passions for a different reason: they agitate the mind so violently as
for a time to suspend the exercise of its faculties, and among others
the faculty of speech." After all, it seems that Kames considers
all of the most intense passions as tongue-tied: "Love and revenge,
when immoderate, are not more loquacious than immoderate grief (495).
But not quite. The dividing line is drawn according to the strength of
the passion ("immoderate"), but also according to its general
tendency, whether it is a positive or a negative feeling (attraction or
repulsion, grounded in pleasure or pain). The two criteria are not
entirely separate, for a passion that is too strong is bound to be
unpleasant according to Kames. Therefore, "figures are not equally
the language of every passion: pleasant emotions, which elevate or swell
the mind, vent themselves in strong epithets and figurative expression;
but humbling and dispiriting passions affect to speak plain" (497).
And again, figurative language "cannot be the language of anguish
and distress" (498).
The reasons for this asymmetry lie in the tradition of moral
philosophy. Seventy years before Kames, in 1692, John Dennis had already
claimed that "no sort of imagery can be the language of
Grief." (35) As Martin Kallich explains, "Grief constricts the
mind and fixes it upon a single object; therefore figures of speech
would be entirely unnatural because they show the mind in motion."
(36) Hobbes in his "Preface to the Passion of Byblis" rejects
more specifically simile as the natural expression of distress, and
Kallich suggests that Dennis borrowed the idea from him. "Where
there is leisure for fiction there is little grief," Doctor Johnson
wrote, dismissing the sincerity of Lycidas. (37) Kames and Priestley
still consider simile, like allegory, unnatural in the highest states of
passion, for the same reasons outlined by Hobbes. That is,
allegories, in common with comparisons, imply a considerable
excursion of the mind from the principal object of its thoughts;
and therefore, though a man in the greatest agitation of mind would
not refuse a metaphor, he may easily be supposed to have his
thoughts so much engaged as not to be at liberty to attend so
particularly to a foreign object, as is necessary in order to note
many points of resemblance, and make an allegory. Allegories,
therefore, as well as comparisons, are the language of men
tolerably composed, or only moderately elevated. (38)
Priestley here is more generous than Dennis, allowing metaphor to
"slip by" as natural to states of the highest passions. We may
suspect (and it can be supported) that by this time figurativity was
sometimes considered to be a fundamental property of language, not an
external ornament. (39) But we can also see why Constance's speech
on Grief was doomed to be considered a "blemish" even by the
"new rhetoricians." It contains an extended metaphor, that is,
an allegory, in which "many points of resemblance" are indeed
established between Grief and Constance's dead son. Moreover, it is
based on a personification, and according to "new rhetorical"
rules, this figure can only qualify as the language of strong passion if
it is "serious," that is, if the speaker is so deluded as
really to believe that (s)he is talking about something animate.
Otherwise personification can only occur as "the exercise, or
rather the play, of a mind at ease." (40) But beyond these reasons
(and any of these would be enough for Kames or Priestley to condemn
Constance's speech as "unnatural") there is the
deeply-rooted conviction that grief involves stasis in the mind and
silence in language. In those moments, association stops. The only
language of grief is silence.
When Coleridge proposes in his lecture that Constance's speech
is "natural," he pushes back the limits of rhetoric and
revises earlier psychology at the same time. Both acts are based on a
conviction that language and mind permeate each other thoroughly.
Passion cannot exist without some kind of expression, since it reveals
itself only through its effects: symptoms of the body, the mind, or of
language. It follows that passion cannot result in absolute stasis, even
in the most extreme states. Coleridge was perhaps encouraged to make
these revisions to earlier theory by Wordsworth, who, as a poet, had
comparable aims. In the Preface to the Lyrical Ballads he writes that
his intention was "tracing" intense emotions like "the
maternal passion through many of its more subtile windings, as in the
poems of the idiot boy and the mad mother," or "the last
struggles of a human being, at the approach of death, cleaving in
solitude to life and society, as in the Poem of the forsaken Indian." (41) Kames would have considered such feelings excessive
and too painful, and therefore necessarily mute, or at least only
appropriately represented in a language free from figures. For
Coleridge, by contrast, the "Mad Mother" was the best modern
example of "the blending, fusing power of Imagination and
Passion." Behind this difference, there is Coleridge's changed
concept of passion. Whereas in earlier associationist thought the
strongest passions were considered unable to "focus" on
anything external to themselves, Coleridge shows that in fact they make
everything internal. As he writes about the "Mad Mother,"
"the alien object to which [the attention] had been so abruptly
diverted, no longer an alien but an ally and an inmate." (42)
In his lecture of 1812 he quotes a favourite couplet from the
"Mad Mother" ("The Breeze I see is in yon tree / It comes
to cool my babe & me") with its subtle personification of the
wind, and asks, perhaps with a final sense of triumph over Kames:
"This was an instance of that abruptness of thought so natural to
grief and if it be admired in images can we say that it is unnatural in
words which are in fact a part of our life and existence?" (1:380).
V
In summary, Coleridge by re-considering the "language of
grief" in Constance's speech, lifts a ban that had been
unreasonably placed on the expression of states of strong passion.
Meanwhile, a more general insight can also be discerned from, or rather
in, his critical discourse. It is that passion is inseparable from
rhetoric because it needs a body to show forth, which only rhetoric can
lend it. While in medicine, or in the theatre, passions were observed
through their physical symptoms, in poetry they could only be traced in
figures of language, which was itself, for Coleridge, an
"organ" and a "body" for thought. As a final
comment, let me add two examples, each of which throws a different light
on this structure (one medical, the other poetical) and opens it to
further investigations. In the fragment of an essay of 1828, "On
the Passions," Coleridge attempts to delineate a theory of the
passions which reconciles the materialist and idealist poles and--in the
words of Alan Richarson--"works towards a physiological psychology that gives primacy to mind and makes the body its expression." (43)
He assigns each appetite and each passion an organ appropriate to it:
the "chief Organ" of Grief, like that of Hunger, is the
stomach. In spite of its medical and anthropological orientation,
however, the essay ends up looking very much like lectures on
literature, especially when it comes to the "figure" of Grief:
The wanting, the craving of Grief (Here quote from Shakespeare's
Constance in King John, and from the Greek Tragedians--& in all the
passions I purpose to make free use of illustration from the Poets,
especially Dante, Chaucer, Shakespear and Ben Johnson) the
characteristic Supersession of the Appetite of Hunger--the equally
characteristic wasting and marasmus of Grief--all these & there are
many more, prove Grief to be a Hunger of the Soul. (44)
Grief, here, is literally embodied: it inhabits the body as much as
hunger does, which it displaces. (45) Nevertheless, it does not cease to
be elusive. It is accessible in no other way than through a train of
symptoms, such as tears (Coleridge raises the question whether they
might not be analogous to the watering of the mouth when we are hungry),
or the best in literature.
My other example is from Shakespeare, who addresses the question of
the "language of grief in several of his plays.46 In Richard II,
there is a scene in which the Queen is grieving for her departed
husband, and has an inexplicable presentiment. Here grief is figured
again as a child; it is not an absent son, as for Constance, but an
unborn child. The Queen says: "Some unborn sorrow ripe in
Fortune's womb / Is coming towards me, and my inward soul / With
nothing trembles; at some thing it grieves, / More than with parting
from my lord the king." Bushy tries to soothe her by saying: "
'Tis nothing but conceit, my gracious lady." The Queen's
reply takes up the themes of grief, figurative language and silence in a
way that must have been instructive for Coleridge:
'Tis nothing less: conceit is still deriv'd
From some forefather grief; mine is not so,
For nothing hath begot my something grief,
Or something hath the nothing that I grieve
'Tis in reversion that I do possess
But what it is that is not yet known what,
I cannot name: 'tis nameless woe, I wot. (2.2.34-40)
An implication of this passage is that the Queen's grief is
nothing more--but also nothing less--than conceit, both in the sense
that it is fiction or fancy, and that it is a "figure of
speech." The self-reflexive conceit she devises plays on the
analogy between "conceit" and "conception"; her
unborn grief is like a child of nothing--like a figure of speech. There
is nothing substantial in it, but this "nothing" is strangely
substantial. In this respect it is exactly like Constance's grief,
which is embodied by its very negativity, mere absence stuffing out
"his vacant garments with his form." These two passages
present the same account of passion and rhetoric that I have traced in
Coleridge's criticism, and undoubtedly, he drew the strongest
inspiration to rethink rhetorical and psychological traditions from
them. Passion "shows forth" in language as a figure of
rhetoric, but this does not mean that it is empty, "mere
words." The negativity of rhetoric is the only means to point to a
psychological region beyond representation. As if to acknowledge this
region, Coleridge commented on the scene I have just quoted from Richard
II: "Terra incognita of the Human Mind" (2:287). The
"rhetoric of passion" has become, for him, the dialect of this
unknown country.
(1.) The editor of Coleridge's lectures calls this a
"commonplace of eighteenth-century criticism," taken over by
Wordsworth (in his appendix on "Poetic Diction" to Lyrical
Ballads) and by Coleridge. See S. T. Coleridge, Lectures 1808-1819 On
Literature, 2 vols., ed. R. A. Foakes; The Collected Works of Samuel
Taylor Coleridge 5, gen. ed. Kathleen Coburn (Princeton & London:
Princeton UP, Routledge & Kegan Paul, 1987), vol. 1, p. 86n. All
parenthesised references in the text are to this edition.
(2.) Adam Potkay, The Fate of Eloquence in the Age of Hume (Ithaca
and London: Cornell UP, 1994), pp. 159-188 (esp. pp. 184-5).
(3.) Potkay writes, "during the course of the [eighteenth]
century the analysis of the passions transcended its practical origins
in classical rhetoric, exfoliating into the psychology of the ruling
passion (Pope), the associationist analysis of complex passions (Hume,
Hartley), the theodicy of the passions (Pope, Akenside), the passional foundation of morality (Shaftesbury, Hutcheson, Hume, Smith), poetic
invocations of personified passions (the Wartons, Gray, Collins), and
narrative enactment of passional agency (Richardson, Fielding). If, as
Hume observed--and everyone else apparently believed--reason was to be
the slave of passions, it was important to know our passions reasonably
well" (Potkay, p. 163).
(4.) Henry Home (Lord Kames), Elements of Criticism, introd. V.
Price (London: Routledge & Thoemmes Press, 1993), vol. 1, p. 33.
(5.) Engell lists Adam Smith, George Campbell, Joseph Priestley,
Hugh Blair, James Beattie, and--more distantly--Thomas Gibbons, Lord
Kames, Thomas Sheridan, and Robert Lowth. James Engell, Forming the
Critical Mind: Dryden to Coleridge (Cambridge, Mass. and London: Harvard
UP, 1989), pp. 195-6. See also Engell, "The New Rhetoricians:
Psychology, Semiotics, and Critical Theory," in Psychology and
Literature in the Eighteenth Century, ed. Christopher Fox (New York: AMS Press, 1987), 277-302.
(6.) The connection between romantic theory and "new
rhetoric" was proposed by Engell, see esp. his "The New
Rhetoric and Romantic Poetics," in Rhetorical Traditions and
British Romantic Literature, ed. Don H. Bialostosky and Lawrence D.
Needham (Bloomington and Indianapolis: Indiana UP, 1995), 217-232.
(7.) Cf. the ending of Hume's "Dissertation on the
Passions": "in the production and conduct of the passions,
there is a certain regular mechanism, which is as susceptible of as
accurate a disquisition, as the laws of motion, optics, hydrostatics, or
any part of natural philosophy" (The Philosophical Works of David
Hume [Boston: Little, Brown and Company, Edinburgh: Adam and Charles
Black, 1854], 189-226, p. 226).
(8.) "The Passions oft; to hear her shell, / Throng'd
around her magic cell, / Exulting, trembling, raging, fainting / Possest
beyond the Muse's painting" (Collins, "The Passions: An
Ode to Music," 3-6). The poem is echoed in Coleridge's
"Kubla Khan" ("mingled measure,"
"measure"--"pleasure," etc.).
(9.) Joanna Baillie, A Selection of Plays and Poems, ed. Amand
Gilroy and Keith Hanley (London: Pickering and Chatto, 2002), p. 13.
(10.) Milton's phrase was cited in lectures of 1808, 1811-12,
and 1813 as well as in the essay "On the Principles of Genial
Criticism" (1814). A note from 1808 highlights its importance:
"Had these three words only been properly understood, and present
in the minds of general Readers, not only almost a Library of false
Poetry would have been either precluded or stillborn, but what is of
more consequence, works truly excellent, and capable of enlarging the
understanding, warming & purifying the heart, and placing in the
centre of the whole Being the Germs of noble & manlike Actions,
would have been the common Diet of the Intellect instead" (1:139).
John Dennis in The Advancement and Reformation of Modern Poetry (1701)
had already adopted Milton's phrase, asserting that "Poetry is
Poetry, because it is more Passionate and Sensual than Prose"
(quoted in Martin Kallich, The Association of Ideas and Critical Theory
in Eighteenth-Century England: A History of a Psychological Method in
English Criticism [The Hague, Paris: Mouton, 1970], p. 41).
(11.) Coleridge discusses "sensuous" as opposed to
"sensual," "sensitive," and "sensible" in
Biographia Literaria, ed. James Engell and Walter Jackson Bate; The
Collected Works of Samuel Taylor Coleridge 7 (Princeton: Princeton UP,
1983), vol. 1, pp. 171-2.
(12.) Joseph Priestley for instance "argues that since
vividness and strong emotions are tied throughout life to reality, the
associated idea of reality should recur when the mind is stimulated
artificially by such devices as vivid representation, ideal presence, or
use of the present tense" (Priestley, A Course of Lectures on
Oratory and Criticism, ed. Vincent M. Bevilacqua and Richard Murphy,
Introduction by David Potter [Carbondale: Southern Illinois University
Press, 1965], p. xxxix).
(13.) Ian Thomson diagnoses "a confusion between rhetoric and
poetic" in their work. Cf. Thomson, "Rhetoric and the
Passions, 1760-1800," in Rhetoric Revalued: Papers from the
International Society for the History of Rhetoric, ed. Brian Vickers,
Medieval & Renaissance Texts & Studies 19 (Binghamton, New York:
Center for Medieval and Early Renaissance Studies, 1982), p. 145. Cf.
also Neil Rhodes, "From Rhetoric to Criticism," in The
Scottish Invention of English Literature, ed. Robert Crawford
(Cambridge: CUP, 1998), 22-36.
(14.) For Kneale, "the 'other' that Romanticism at
once turns to and away from is ... the classical rhetorical
tradition" (J. Douglas Kneale, Romantic Aversion: Aftermaths of
Classicism in Wordsworth and Coleridge [Liverpool: Liverpool UP, 1999],
p. 4).
(15.) John Milton, "Of Education," in Complete Prose
Works of John Milton, ed. Ernest Sirluck (New Haven & London: Yale
UP & Oxford UP, 1959), vol. 2, 362-415, p. 403.
(16.) Priestley refers to his "Lectures on Philosophical
Criticism" in An Examination of Dr. Reid's Inquiry into the
Human Mind (1775); quoted in Kallich, 224. Vicesimus Knox in an essay
("On Philosophical Criticism and the little Assistance it gives to
Genius") associates "philosophical criticism" with
"writers of North Britain," i.e. with the Scottish critics.
Quoted in Kallich, 220.
(17.) Jane Moody, Illegitimate Theatre in London, 1770-1840
(Cambridge: CUP, 2004), pp. 79-80.
(18.) Cf. Coleridge's later criticism of Wordsworth in the
Biographia where he writes about passion as "unusual
stimulation": "For the property of passion is not to create;
but to set in increased activity" (Biographia, 2:57). A discussion
of this section can be found in David Vallins, Coleridge and the
Psychology of Romanticism: Feeling and Thought (London & New York:
Macmillan & St. Martin's Press, 2000), pp. 32-33.
(19.) Brown's significance for Coleridge is noted by Foakes,
vol. 1, p. 222n. For Baillie, see Alan Richarson, British Romanticism
and the Science of the Mind (Cambridge: CUP, 2001), p. 77.
(20.) For example, in 1811: We have to "determine how what
rank, what <comparative> estimation, we ought to give to this part
of our nature--whether it is one of those which tho' permanent in
itself is perpetually varying the Objects that gratify it--such as
Curiosity or which turns with the disgust of Satiety from the former to
pass from a dainty into a nuisance or a base passion, such as Envy &
its Mask, Scorn--or whether they are indeed the worthy & constituent
Powers of our nobler Nature, not only permanent in themselves but always
& solely to be gratified by the same outward excellencies, the same
in essence, tho' infinitely varying in form, subject, and
degree--Such are our Imagination, our Delight from the clear Perception
of Truth, and our moral Sense" etc. (1:185)
(21.) At least according to Kames: "And there is a material
difference between appetites and passions, which makes it proper to
distinguish them by different names: the latter have no existence till a
proper object be presented; whereas the former exist first, and then are
directed to an object: a passion comes after its object; an appetite
goes before it, which is obvious in the appetites of hunger, thirst, and
animal love, and is the same in the other appetites above
mentioned" (Kames, vol. 1, p. 44).
(22.) Cf. "The view that thought must satisfy an emotional
condition, and that meaning consists in an expressive purpose rather
than mere logical relations was among Coleridge's most enduring
opinions" (Vallins, p. 34).
(23.) Here is another point of similarity with Kames who writes:
"The science of rational criticism tends to improve the heart no
less than the understanding. It tends, in the first place, to moderate
the selfish affections: by sweetening and harmonizing the temper, it is
a strong antidote to the turbulence of passion and violence of
pursuit" (Kames, vol. 1, p. 9).
(24.) For example, in his 1808 notes: "I have never had any
strong ambition of publishing, as or being known as an author--and yet,
if with the consciousness of many infirmities I may have palliate[d]
them by some better qualities, from activity of mind, & a passionate
desire of attaining & communicating truth ... I have passed the far
greater part of my life and employed almost all the powers which
Providence has entrusted to me, in the acquirement of knowledge from
Books reading & in conversation" (LL 1:125).
(25.) Kames, vol. 1, p. 12.
(26.) Cf. B. I. Manolescu: "The practice of criticism in
Elements, in contrast, involves making arguments based upon so-called
universal principles of human nature ... these principles validate
critical judgement. One would only need an acquaintance with the
principles of human nature to practice this criticism. Given that for
Kames these principles are discovered primarily through introspection,
one may need not go far to acquire the requisite knowledge"
("Traditions of Rhetoric, Criticism, and Argument in Kames's
Elements of Criticism," Rhetoric Review 22:3 [2003] 225-242, p.
236).
(27.) Later (in 1818) he very self-consciously chooses a different
method--that of historical investigation--instead of "the proof
from an analysis of the human mind in itself, in its component forms and
faculties," which he nevertheless calls "the only strictly
scientific" one (2:47). We can easily identify this with the
Kantian "a priori" method (and the historical one, perhaps, as
Hegelian), but we might add that the Kantian method is, in this respect,
similar to that of Kames.
(28.) In the 1797 Encyclopaedia Britannica article on the
"Passions," partly based on Kames, Constance was cited in
connection with Grief (XIV 13 B). Cf. Shorter Works and Fragments, ed.
H. J. Jackson and J. R. de J. Jackson, The Collected Works of Samuel
Taylor Coleridge 11 (Princeton: Princeton UP, 1995), vol. 2, p. 1451n.
(29.) Lecture XIV ("Of the Influence of the Passions on each
other, and other Circumstances relating to strong Emotions of
Mind"); see Priestley, p. 103.
(30.) Priestley, p. 104.
(31.) In Confessions of an Inquiring Spirit, there are more than
one "friends" representing different critical stances to the
Bible, which are all important for Coleridge for some reason, but from
all of which he wants to distance himself.
(32.) Adam Potkay revives the 16th-century rhetorical term
pathopoeia ("whereby the passions of the mind ... are
personified") to describe Hume's strategy in the Natural
History of Religion (Potkay, p. 174).
(33.) Thomson, p. 144.
(34.) Cf. Kneale, pp. 50-1.
(35.) Quoted in Kallich, p. 38.
(36.) Kallich, p. 38. (He also notes that the idea is present in
Dryden and Boileau, among others).
(37.) Quoted by Kneale, p. 42.
(38.) Priestley, Lectures, p. 195.
(39.) Evidence for a changing attitude towards figures in the work
of Priestley and Blair is discussed by Thomson, pp. 146-7.
(40.) Priestley, p. 254.
(41.) Wordsworth's Literary Criticism, ed. W. J. B. Owen
(London and Boston: Routledge & Kegan Paul, 1974), p. 72.
(42.) Coleridge, Biographia, 2:150-1 (Ch 22).
(43.) Richarson, p. 43.
(44.) Coleridge, Shorter Works, 2:1451.
(45.) Cf. Richardson on "[m]aterialist, naturalistic, and
embodied notions of the psyche" which were present in
Coleridge's thinking "throughout his career, particularly in
regard to his speculation on the emotions and the unconscious" (p.
41).
(46.) On Renaissance views about the rhetoric of passion cf.
Jacqueline T. Miller, "The Passion Signified: Imitation and the
Construction of Emotions in Sidney and Wroth," Criticism (Fall,
2001) 407-42. Also, Brian Vickers, "On the Practicalities of
Renaissance Rhetoric," in Rhetoric Revalued, 133-141; Vickers,
" 'The Power of Persuasion': Images of the Orator Elyot
to Shakespeare," in Renaissance Eloquence, ed. James J. Murphy (Berkeley: University of California Press, 1983), 411-435.