Onetti y la (in)fidelidad a las reglas del juego.
Hernandez, Ana Maria
As Wolfgang Luchting once observed, "Everyone fears
Onetti." Even though the Uruguayan writer preceded the Boom by more
than a quarter-century, critical attention to his novels is still
surprisingly meager, a fact that Luchting attributed to Onetti's
complex, at times hermetic style.
Ronald Mendez-Clark departs from the premise that Los adioses (1954)
is the landmark that separates the early Onetti from the master with
full command of narrative montage and plot development that
characterizes his mature work. Furthermore, Mendez-Clark posits that Los
adioses is perhaps Onetti's best work, the best example of a
carefully constructed narrative in which the novelist best exhibits his
technical mastery experimenting with all levels of fiction. It is also,
perhaps, the text in which hermetism and ambiguity--the hallmark traits
that most fascinate and annoy his readers and critics--attain the utmost
tension. Lastly, the critic asserts that Los adioses is Onetti's
only work after La vida breve (1950) that is not part of the Santa Maria
cycle, but the one that best displays the narrative techniques
associated with that cycle.
Onetti y la (in)fidelidad a los reglas del juego is divided into
three sections. The first addresses the reader's participation in
assembling and disassembling the story. Here the critic examines the
narrative montages and the net of insinuations with which Onetti draws
the reader into the game of decipherment. Of particular note is the
analysis of the ambiguity surrounding the "true" identity of
the young woman and the nature of her relationship to the consumptive protagonist of the novel. The possibility of an incestuous
relationship--first postulated by Luchting and later half-admitted by
Onetti as "the final half-turn of the screw" in the
interpretation of the novel--receives a careful and detailed
consideration in this section. The critic proceeds throughout the study
with a quasi-Socratic method of unanswered questions that are sometimes
capped with a "Tal vez." This method, though effective in
highlighting the multitude of possibilities that Onetti's narrative
style creates at every turn, at times weakens the impact of the
critic's judgment, which often seems diluted in a sea of unanswered
questions and conditional statements.
The second section, which will be extremely valuable to serious
students of Onetti, surveys major critical interpretations of Los
adioses, specifically those of Emir Rodriguez Monegal (love versus
sexuality), James East Irby (Faulkner's influence), Hugo Verani
(ambiguity), Jorge Ruffinelli (subjectivity), Wolfgang Luchting (reader
participation), Joel Hancock (psychopathic distortions on the part of
the narrator), Jose Luis Coy (point of view), Doris Rolfe (ambiguity),
and other studies by Josefina Ludmer, Silvia Molloy, and Aldo Prior. The
third and final section conducts an in-depth textual analysis of the
novel, attempting to "expose" Onetti's subtle tricks and
deceptions. Particularly lucid is Mendez-Clark's examination of the
ambiguities created by the superposition of the three points of view in
the novel--the storekeeper's, the nurse's, and the
chambermaid's--and how these support and/or contradict one another.
In summary, Mendez-Clark's analysis of Los adioses succeeds in
conveying Onetti's ultimate belief in the impossibility of grasping
truth. As the critic states, "Lo unico que nos queda es la certeza
de que la verdad que importa no esta en los hechos sino en el intento de
apropiarse de los hechos."
Ana Maria Hernandez LaGuardia Community College, CUNY