Tongues untied: Harold Brodkey's radical candor.
Taylor, Justin
Tongues untied: Harold Brodkey's radical candor.
Is Harold Brodkey the greatest--or at any rate, the most
lauded--writer who never produced a great book? His 1958 debut, First
Love and Other Sorrows, was a big hit but hasn't aged well. Sure,
"The State of Grace," the title story, and "The
Quarrel" form a brilliant little trilogy, sharing a narrator and
depicting a midcentury adolescence made numinous by yearning--economic,
intellectual, cultural, erotic; take your pick if you can tell them
apart. A male classmate in "First Love ..." looks "like a
statue that had been rubbed with honey and warm wax, to get a golden
tone, and he carried at all times, in the neatness of his features and
the secret proportions of his face and body that made him so handsome in
that particular way, the threat of seduction." But the other six
stories offer diminishing returns, and Brodkey spent the next thirty
years bluffing about an epic novel that kept failing to materialize save
in sporadic fragments appearing in the New Yorker and other magazines.
In 1988 he published his second book, a six-hundred-page collection of
those fragments that somehow was not the promised novel, but rather
Stories in an Almost Classical Mode. (The novel finally appeared in
1991, and made an 835-page flop, but that's a story in an almost
classical mode for another day.)
There are eighteen stories in Stories, several of them
novella-length, not all of them gems. Gordon Lish, its editor, once sat
me down--this was back when he still liked me, circa 2007--and named the
seven stories he regarded as essential, and told me to discard the rest.
His picks were "Innocence," "His Son, in His Arms, in
Light, Aloft," "Largely an Oral History of My Mother,"
"Verona: A Young Woman Speaks," "Ceil,"
"S.L.," and "The Boys on Their Bikes." My judgments
don't match his exactly, but the proportion (38 percent of the
book) seems about right.
"Verona" is narrated by a teenager recalling a European
tour with her family: "I feel joy or amusement or I don't know
what; it is all through me, like a nausea--I am ready to scream and
laugh, that laughter that comes out like magical, drunken, awful, and
yet pure spit or vomit or God knows what, makes me a child mad with
laughter." In "Play" a boy feels sexual friction while
wrestling with a younger playmate; he does not understand what is
occurring but his instinct is to feed the sensation. As discovery
becomes knowledge, serendipity becomes intent, and the kinky innocence
shades into menace.
Something similar is at work in "Innocence,"
Brodkey's most notorious story, in which a Harvard undergraduate
named Wiley tricks his sexually self-effacing girlfriend, Orra (yes,
really, he named her that), into having her first orgasm. It is a
thirty-page story with a twenty-page sex scene, most of which consists
of Wiley's inner monologue while performing cunnilingus, which he
has told Orra is for his own pleasure, because she gets upset whenever
he pays attention to her needs. "The darkness of my senses when the
rhythm absorbed me (so that I vanished from my awareness, so that I was
blotted up and was a stain, a squid hidden, stroking Orra) made it
twilight or night for me; and my listening for her pleasure, for our
track on that markless ocean, gave me the sense that where we were
..." Actually I'm going to go ahead and stop right there.
Two obvious comments. First, that what is great about Brodkey is
inextricable from what is awful about him. Second, that this story is an
enormous joke that nonetheless begs to be taken seriously, which come to
think of it describes undergraduate men across the generations. When I
was nineteen, "Innocence" blew my mind. Who knew that you
could write about sex (and/or perform cunnilingus) with such nuance--and
for so long? These days the main thing that stands out to me is
Wiley's fickle sense of when "no" does and doesn't
mean "no." It's a bit, as the kids say, problematic. But
if "Innocence" has outlived its status as the literature of
sexual liberation, it survives (or deserves to survive) as the
literature of radical candor. Which feels true of Brodkey in general.
Nothing is unsayable for him and all of it is said more or less
gorgeously. The only catch is that a lot of it is repetitive,
egotistical, shellacked in misogyny, and boring as hell. Perhaps the
highest irony is that this maximalist's maximalist is best
appreciated in small doses. A mouthful or two will usually get you
there, should you happen to find yourself in the mood.
Justin Taylor is the author of the story collection Flings (Harper,
2014).
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